The conflict at the heart of the story on first blush is loud music. However, there is a greater conflict you raise and do not address: Jane is married! Despite her suspicions, surely this is a more serious issue than music. Perhaps your readers would like to know more about how she handles this conflict.
You have good scene description in here and we certainly do have a grasp on how Jane feels.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. We very much appreciate that you engage with other authors.
Amazing story, you made it clear that we should have a clear mind to what we want to discuss with someone about a bothering issue, as Jane went over to complain to Henry, her neighbor.
The event became an eventful one for the both of them, only that Henry had been playing the music loudly to get her and she never did complain until both hearts were fixed on each other.
Wow what an explanation to the whole story, thanks and you got the message so well 😊
Yeah, I guess she's already had the mind of ending the bad relationship she was having to accept Henry.
Thanks for the support and comment, I appreciate