This is a nice love story. The best line in the story may be:
Twelve years after their wedding, Ella and Jay had fought, cried and felt hurt with each other but somehow they get past all of it with the thoughts of how they started.
Until this line it seems almost too good to be true (even though it is a story!). Then you add a truth we can all recognize. Loving someone and living with someone-- these two circumstances may at times be incompatible. But then if love does exist, it is remembered and wounds are healed.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. You have a great arc here and you also use the prompt very well. We appreciate that you engage actively with other authors in the community.
Yeah, I thought so too... There's no relationship without its ups and downs but love wins in the end.
Thanks for the support