This story begins well. You set the scene for what will follow and you whet the reader's appetite. What is wrong with the character? Why will he die? readers wonder. You answer quickly and explain that instead of sorrow at the prospect of death, he finally finds purpose in life. As you explain well, he lives on, and his fortune continues, in the young people he has helped. Good use of the prompt.
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That is it, he lived well regardless his health issues... Thanks for the support