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RE: A Family Gathering Without Her

in The Ink Welllast year

You have a nice arc in this story, @merit.ahama. It is not predictable. Most of us have a troublesome family member, and most of us would rather not confront the problem. However, in your story the oldest uncle finally assumes his responsibility, and the eldest aunt also matures. This is quite a realistic resolution, one to which we can all relate.

There are style issues in the piece, having to do with grammar, but overall reading the story was a satisfying experience. Thank you for sharing.

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Will do better, thanks for the feedback 💯