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RE: Another Mother Joins the Resistance

in The Ink Well • 3 years ago

You tell this story with breathless intensity. Even readers (this curator) with no knowledge of the game can follow along and become interested in the characters. Classic good vs. evil. Great writing. There are a couple of proofing errors you might want to change (ex: quite for quiet, load for loud). A well-written story reads even better with these minor points cleared up.

Thanks for sharing this with our community. Have you engaged with at least two other writers in the Ink Well community? Thank you!

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     3 years ago  

    Hello,

    Thanks for reading carefully. I will go back and fix the words.

    My friends post their stories and the wotw in inkwell. I interact with posts in inkwell everyday, but this is the first time I entered my own writing.

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