Great effort with your use of an analogy. It's great to connect with people, and the memories of your uncle will stay with you forever.
Just as a pointer; It might be a good idea to check this tip of ours for fiction writing that could also apply to your true stories, catalogue of fiction writing tips called Show, Don't Tell.
Thank you for sharing your story with us, don't forget to engage with other members of the community as well!
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Thank you for suggesting that tip, I went through it just now and saw how beautifully a few things can be portrayed. I will keep that in mind from next.