Hello @mjvdc,
The deliberate pacing of this story works well. The young lady is certain about her life choices. She proceeds with each day as a motivated, hard working career person. Then the climax, the crisis that allows for character growth takes place. This forces a re-examination of her values and she is able to change course.
Well done. Thank you for sharing this story with us. We appreciate that you engage with other authors in the community.
@theinkwell Thank you very much! Your opinion is very important to me.