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RE: The only home I now know

in The Ink Welllast year

Beautifully written piece. However, you need to watch your pronouns:

She gave me a name. I wasn't familiar with it. Nevertheless, I closed my eyes, as though I were trying to recall his father. She added some more information to help my recollection process. "Okay," I said, nodding as though I just remembered his dad.

Should read :

She gave me a name. I wasn't familiar with it. Nevertheless, I closed my eyes, as though I were trying to recall her father. She added some more information to help my recollection process. "Okay," I said, nodding as though I just remembered her dad.

If you are using a translator please add a note to tell us which one you’re using. Also, you should post the original in your language underneath the English version.

You have boundless talent, you should nurture it carefully! One of the best ways to do so is to use the right tools to write— Google Docs and and an editor such as Grammarly.

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@theinkwell We live in a society where people are free to switch from one gender to another and also decide the pronoun they go by at any given time. So I thought my literary freedom included that. Lol

That's a dry joke.

I don't have much trouble with English grammar. I hardly use grammar checkers. It was just a careless mistake; the kind haven't for centuries.

I just have to be more careful in the future.

Thank you.