Your friends’ were very forgiving. Koko was very lucky that the group of young men thought that it was a minor infraction to betray trust.
Your writing brims with potential and you’ve done a really good job of incorporating elements of creativity in your nonfiction. However, the reader would, probably, want to know it Koko faced any consequences.
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@theinkwell The thing is, everyone took as fun; at least they pretended to do so. We joked over it, and mocked those who couldn't withstand.
At that period, it was a norm to have such occurrence in young people's party. The only difference is that Koko wasn't popular for such acts.
The person who would've reported it to the police, would've been seen as the real betrayer.
I was going to engage,based on my schedule. And I just did.