Hello @mosin-nagant,
Welcome back! You return with a story that has great atmosphere and emotion. The prompt is perfectly addressed. Unfortunately, this story, at 366 words, falls well below our guidelines. In the guidelines we rrcommend that a story have between 750-1000 words. Still, you managed to have a complete arc and a sympathetic character.
We would like to note one inconsequential error (seems to be): The sedan changes from black to red.
Thank you for submitting this. We look forward to reading more of your writing.
It seems I came back in a pretty bad way. Thank you for paying attention and remembering me as a member of this community. Sorry, I wrote all those stories just a few minutes before the time ran out. This was a mistake. Time flies. I forgot one of the important rules of this community. I'll try my best. Thanks again 🙏🙏🙏