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RE: Flight To Abuja | The Ink Well Creative Nonfiction Prompt #69

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This was an enjoyable read, Ishmael. It was nicely developed, had good balance, and was diligently edited. It flowed well as a piece of writing. Your story was interesting and peppered with humour. I particularly enjoyed this line:

The plane started to jerk. It felt like there were potholes in the clouds.

Having driven on many roads in Africa, I have to say, what a fantastic simile!

Thank you for sharing a story from your life in The Ink Well.

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Wow! Thank you, @theinkwell. I am so had you enjoyed it.