Hello @mrnightmare.net,
You are having formatting issues which are preventing your pictures from showing and which are also interfering with the appearance of your text. However, the story is quite good. You have given us a dramatic plot. A young boy needs to make his way in the world, but he has not resources. He scrambles, as many people do, to support himself and to get an education. Sounds like it's hard to make it in Manila if you are not born with money.
By the way, that is a great first line!
Thank you for sharing this exciting story with us.
Thanks, yes, I used "~~~" many of this symbol that ruined the formatting. Sorry about that, not that good in technical things.
Yes, manila is very hard since there's not much opportunity for those who don't have the requirements to work. Thanks