Hello @mrprinxcee, welcome to The Ink Well!
Your story was very nicely developed and had a lovely balance between narrative, action, and dialogue. What a great love story. It's a good thing that you set aside your bias against dating a woman in the arts ;-) You had a few missing words and strange inclusions which suggested that there needs to be a little more attention to detail when editing and proof reading, but otherwise this was a pleasure to read... and thank you for supporting other writers in the community. Please could your provide image sourcing for the photo you have used. If it is your own photo, which I suspect it is, please simple state so at the bottom of your post.
Now that you're here, please have a look around and get to know our community. Here are a few tips for getting acquainted:
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We accept two kinds of short stories in The Ink Well: fictional stories and creative nonfiction stories. We are all about quality, and we expect writers to carefully review their work before posting. Not doing so will result in low curation rewards or posts being ignored. You can see our article on checking your posts for grammar here.
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Again, welcome!
Thank you
Well noted