Hello @myztiqakusuk, You describe scene and character very well. We feel Ola's grief when she loses her parents. Your description of that scene is excellent--a principal who does not know how to give this news. In the long run, the faith that people have in the young girl lifts her from her despondency. There is a little bit of confusion in the middle where you refer to 'Ola' as 'Kola'. This is not terribly distracting but you probably want to have the two names agree. (I could not find the word shoe. Is it there?)
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I also could not find the word "shoe" in the story.
Just in case you didn't understand the prompt, @myztiqakusuk, the instructions are to use all three words in your story: shoes, mood, adventure.
I did find boots, though! :-)