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RE: Creative Nonfiction Prompt #28: My father's last birthday

in The Ink Well2 years ago

In his illness, your father seems to have undergone a series of changes, which altered him in a variety of ways over the years. We learn so much about him and what mattered to him in this story, which highlights a cherished memory vividly. Your descriptions of the celebration weave in wonderfully with the photos you've selected, making us feel as if were also at the party. Thank you for sharing your father's memory with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.

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Thank you for your comments! It was really nice to remember it as I was writing. A writing tribute to his memory. Regards