This story is wonderful. You adopt a perfect voice for such a tale. You capture the scenes and characters with vivid visual effect. The story even has a great arc, and then.... You see what happens when one ends a sentence with...?
If one couples ... with a suggestive phrase such as, "one that could only be stopped by someone willing to sacrifice everything", the sense of anticipation is emphasized. But the story is over!! Therefore, the reader is left frustrated, waiting for a resolution.
Obviously, more is coming, but the story by itself is left with an unsatisfying resolution. So, kudos for a story well written, and a bit of regret because the reader is taken by the narrative and yet is left wanting at the end.
Thank you for sharing this with us, @nftseller19.
Thanks for your feedback! I am really grateful for saying that you like my story.
I'll take your feedback into consideration and aim to provide a more conclusive resolution in future stories. Your insights are valuable for improving my writing. Thank you again for taking the time to share your thoughts!