Hi @ozibaby. We would like to welcome you to The Ink Well and also provide some important guidance.
The first thing you should know is that we require all images to come from license free sites such as Pixababy, Unsplash or Pexels. Your first image is from a Google search, not a proper source. Could you please replace it?
The next important item is that we expect writers who post in The Ink Well to do a careful check for quality before posting in our community. For example, there should be spaces between words and sentences. The pronoun "I" should always be capitalized. Misspellings and other errors are very easy to catch if you look for the red underlines in your draft and fix them before posting. For example, here is a screenshot of one of your paragraphs which shows how the editor window highlights each error by underlining it in red.
Be sure to read our community rules and see our catalog of storytelling tips for additional helpful information.
Thank you.
Thank you theinkwell