Gosh, you had the perfect plans and made the setting just right. It's great to have some me time:)
Your story had great dialogue which added depth to it, and the mysterious noise made my imagination run wild. It's good that it was only a rat, but I anticipated some real action with that golf club.
Thanks for sharing this with us, and we would like to encourage you to check to browse some of the stories in the community, and engage with other authors, as engagement goes a long way:)
Thanks very much, i really appreciate it, and i visited other authors page too