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RE: Smile, Baby

in The Ink Well8 months ago

This story has a gentle, but clear arc. Phyna is stressed at the start. It seems impossible to finish all her responsibilities. She is exhausted. Then she hears a song, and it inspires her. She will look at the positive. She will smile. All of her responsibilities will fall in place and she will take them in stride, no matter how hard things get.

You create a believable scene, one to which many readers will relate. Most of us feel overwhelmed sometimes. The challenge is to handle the responsibilities and maintain our positive composure. Music did that for you, and continues to do that. It is the same curative for many.

Thank you for sharing this experience with us, @phyna.

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Thank you for your wonderful comment, Inkwell.
I'm glad this was highly relatable.