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RE: Dreamland

in The Ink Well4 years ago

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You take us on a kind of dance here, a dance between Dreamland and whatever else it is that we experience in waking hours. Some bits stand out:

Come to think of it, nobody craps in my dreams either. I do need to pee in my dreams sometimes.

See what I mean about meaningless jobs? I can’t even staff a music store in my dreams!

Despite what seems to be a dismal exercise, redeeming humor glints through. Beautifully written, and not depressing although at times it seems top lead us there. After all, we can always escape to Dreamland.

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