Your story starts off with promise... You spend time setting up the backstory but then the backstories and characters mentioned are largely unrelated to the rest of the story. You also spend time describing one evening of fortune/misfortune in the life of the three friends but then rush through closing paragraphs skimming and summarising your MC's arrest, interrogation, imprisonment, release, starting a new business and the ending of his friendships, but without developing any of these threads. Your stories would have more of an impact if you focused in on a narrower plot. You can't fit the events of a novel into a short story, so you have to be more selective over which parts you mention. Short stories demand that character and story arcs be tighter and cover shorter periods of time to be effective in delivery. The epilogue of events after your MC's capture do not add to the story, but instead end up taking away from it. I hope this makes sense and that you find the feedback useful.
I would work out the story next time, I really appreciate the correction.