In telling your story, it jumped a bit from scene to scene in what feels like a rather implausible series of events. Priscilla certainly enjoyed a lucky streak when she needed it most to achieve her dreams. What I did like is that it illustrated that a little kindness and opportunity go a long way to helping someone to achieve dreams that remain buried and unrealised, simply through lack of resources. So that was a nice touch, @rammargarita
Thank you for writing in The Ink Well.
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