An allegorical science fiction piece? 🙂.It's a hard genre to pull off and was a challenge to follow at first. I had to read it three times! It feels like this piece needs a bit more context and backstory development for the reader to understand who and what the different characters represent. We are left wondering if the shiny new software win out? Will the people be forever trapped in a cycle of tech addiction and control? Will the forces of light or dark win the day? An interesting and unique piece, @ricardo993. Please remember to comment on at least two other stories in The Ink Well for each one that you submit. Thank you for writing in The Ink Well.
I'm sorry for not commenting earlier, I've been very busy. Thank you very much for your message. Yes, I wanted the story to be difficult to understand, it's about sci-fi. I missed posting in the community, best regards. I'll try to comment on the other stories.