An enjoyable read, @rinconpoetico7 . You draw us in taking us through the thoughts and emotions, and physical sensations of the jump. Very nicely crafted with a good story arc and conflict resolution. If I might add... watch for the odd incorrect pronoun gender creeping in, and for repetition in your descriptions such as your MC closing her eyes in two consecutive paragraphs describing her at 100 metres. There was one other instance that can pull a reader out of the story... on regaining consciousness a few days after the jump, apparently the wheels of justice have turned very quickly for her husband and he has already been found guilty and imprisoned. In reality, a trial would likely have been held and that would take a lot more than a few days to arrange and come to a conclusion.
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If I still needed to polish some details, I just didn't want to make it too long for the readers.
Thanks for the advice, I keep paying more attention to the translation.
Good day!