Wow! You can spin a tale. This was so suspenseful, so real. The sense of doom hangs over the truck. Not until the very end can a sigh of relief be exhaled. Great job in writing an entertaining story, and great job in writing to the prompt.
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Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this story and I like how it turned out!
Yes, I commented on @bruno-kema and @becourious so far! I'm sure I'll be commenting on more in the next day or so. :)