Hello, @riottales
A young couple begin the adventure of life together and encounter drawbacks that come from the outside world and a deep knowledge of each other.
Delilah is affected by loneliness while her partner works and fills her with questions and Danny resents the responsibilities and withdraws into himself until one day he explodes.
It is a recurring situation, therefore very believable, that needs to be stopped before it escalates into more serious issues.
Delilah's response is the right one and provides conditional forgiveness.
“For now,” Delilah conceded.
It is a good response to the weekly call.
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