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RE: Edna Grossbart Lives

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Perhaps your title is a bit ironic? Does Edna Grossbart live, or is the composite Edna Grossbart someone else completely? You try your hand at science fiction,and you do so deftly. This is not merely an excursion into what might be at a future time, with advanced technology. This is an inquiry into the essence of an individual.

It's great that you begin your inquiry with hair dye. So deceptively superficial. But even something as trivial as hair color has not escaped the influence of a borrowed heart.

Your story is intriguing, and amusing. Thank you for posting it in the Ink Well community. As always, we ask that you read the work of other writers in the community and share comments with them. We ask everyone to support community members. (We also have this in The Ink Well community rules on our home page and in our weekly writing prompts.) Thank you! And, please continue writing and posting.

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Thanks @theinkwell I appreciate your comments and feedback. Yes I am beginning to catch up on other writers posts, so much great stuff here! Many thanks