The titles is key to this complex interaction between two men bent on making a profit from tea. British Occupied Chelm. An empire built, for a time at least, on tea. Harold and Germaine are playing a power game. The corruption that drives the game is manifest. Neither has clean hands. You use the prompt well here, not only as a device, but also as a symbol of empire and corrupt power.
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@theinkwell thank you once again for your great comments and encouragement ! It's such a wonderful space here on Hive to be able to publish and read other work. I'm dedicating time later today to read and comment on stories ny other authors which by the way are great!! Best wishes and thanks as ever
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