Hello @sevalo13, thank you for your story, it was a sweet tale.
The Ink Well Community Rules request posts in English: please place the English version first, followed by the Spanish.
You may want to reconsider using swear words: there is a place for them, but gratuitous use undermines good writing.
Please watch for pronoun use:
That night I was sitting on the furniture, after talking to Mom on the phone, assuring him that I would behave.
Him should be her.
Good start!
Thank you, I correct it.