Keenly plotted with the perfect dash of well structured dialogue and intriguing action. You’ve added so much to the atmosphere of this piece by including little details— like the menacing mosquitoes— that it brings your piece life, beautifully. However, over and above the sheer entertainment you’ve provided, you’ve also turned this into an “African” story, which just makes it extra, extra special.
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