This story seems to have flowed straight from you imagination, to your keyboard. It's the kind of romp that would make a good episode on the The Little Rascals. If you're are not familiar with this classic series, you'll love it.
Back to your story. You respond to the prompt with light-hearted spontaneity and have a good handle on dialogue. You show Tom Sawyeresque alacrity in dealing with the bully issue.
The story is very amusing. Thank you for posting it in the Ink Well community.
I honestly was laughing while I was writing it! I'm glad that you enjoyed it as well.
Looked up the Little Rascals. Spanky and Alfalfa. Those faces would do a great job with the bug-eyed look! ha ha
Thank you for the visit