Thank you for sharing your imaginative story, @strangeverest. Before we curate your story, please provide the original source link for the image. While you may have edited it in Canva, it's still required to provide the source for the original image. Thank you.
A few other tips for you:
- It is standard to begin a sentences with a capital letter. (Your first sentence begins with a lower case letter, so it looks as if something is missing.)
- You can make your story more readable by separating each paragraph with a space. (Currently your story is one long paragraph, which makes it hard to read.)
- You can make it more engaging for the reader by providing more details.
- Sentences should be separated with period. In the following two examples, you used a comma.
He has been enslaved and maltreated by the slave traders before he got to the strange land where they worship a mighty dragon,the dragon is their god and they always offer human sacrifices to it, mostly the slaves.
The boy was gentle and meek,he would never disobey anyone no matter how much maltreatment he has been through.
Hopefully these tips help you! Thanks for posting your work in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on other writers' stories. We will curate this one once you provide the source link.
Here is the source link.
https://www.canva.com/design/DAE0tQFsFQg/m9Ap71c48bRiirPAy7daSQ/view?utm_content=DAE0tQFsFQg&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=sharebutton
Hi @strangeverest. Thanks for that. Be sure to provide a link to your image source within your post in the future.
I'll gladly do so.
And thanks for the correction,I'm so happy to see my mistakes and learn from it.