Your story is very interesting and has a lot of great detail — not to mention quite a surprise ending! It's great that she has found her mother. But won't her mother attack her like she did when Bunnybear was young?
You have a nice writing style, @talon12. Unfortunately, there are many typographical errors. You can catch these by doing a careful reading of your story before posting, or by using tools like Grammarly or Google Docs. You can learn more about drafting your content in Google docs, so you can see the errors and fix them, in our article Help for the Grammatically Challenged. It is one the many resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. Keep writing!
Thanks. I have made the needed corrections. My bad to have missed them before.