There is so much action and detail in this story, boiling over with hard circumstances that only get worse. However, in your resolution we find no answer to why his wife left. Was she unable to admit the truth? What did Billy have over her, and why would he choose to debase her over it?
By filling in some of the details, this story would really shine! We also do want to note our stance on violence, although this isn't excessive, please do be aware that we mute stories that are. Thank you for sharing your story with us, don't forget to engage with two other members of the community as well!