Welcome, @tayo6! Thank you for sharing your first story in The Ink Well. We read your intro post from when you joined Hive, and it's nice to meet you. You certainly have a love of literature and writing.
You have already begun to engage in the community. Thank you! This is important and something we value highly in our community members.
Your story is interesting. An unusual point of view - "second person." Nicely done!
One important tip: Please be sure to provide attribution for all images, even if they are your own. Thank you.