This is very, very nice. Very well done, very creative, very original. You pull this off with style. It is appreciated that you set the terms of the story up front: Dialogue is in bold. It is fiction. (That is funny... you thought it necessary to inform the reader that this story about a man resurrecting as a puppy is fiction.) You have a nice perspective and an engaging sense of irony.
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. Hope to see more from you. Writers in the Ink Well community support each other by reading and commenting on stories. We expect our writers to support each other by commenting on at least two stories written by fellow writers.
Keep writing!
Thank you! Maybe I have more things to learn from you. Actually, I want to interact but I always lose my resource credits in one comment. I am saving them for now then publish. Once I already have enough resource credits, I will do my part in the community. Thanks again! I want to be consistent on the style that I used...I hope it will be fine on the readers and did not found it corny haha. I am always accepting constructive feedback from the readers to improve my stories... please say the truth if I did a mistake or the suggestions and recommendations.
Hello @theimpostor. I just delegated you 15 Hive from my tiny secondary account so you can maybe have a little more flexibility.
Wow thank you so much. I have now 85% credits. This will be a great help. Will do my part in the community and be active as I can:)
You are welcome. You seem to be an interesting person. I want you to enjoy your Hive experience. If a really tiny delegation can help, that's great.
Thank you. I just heard Hive from my friends and tried to write some short story. I will always do my best to give and bring back to the community.