You did alright. There is still a mystery, but you have created a complete story arc: beginning, middle and end. The conflict in the story is, who is in the toy house? You solved that mystery by showing us Amanda. That's good enough.
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I will take it as a compliment, thank you and have some !LUV
@theimpostor(1/1) gave you LUV.