This is a great horror story. You demonstrate that horror is psychological. You don't need blood and gore in order to elicit feelings of terror. Putting the prompt in the words of the old man works very. It blends seamlessly with the rest of the story.
Thank you for sharing this (bloodless!) horror story with the Ink Well community. Have you engaged with two writers in the community? Thank you!
Thank you, I just like thrill and intense with horror story. It should be bloodless.
Yes yes I just read some but will read more.