Your story has a strong arc. There is a problem proposed at the beginning and by the end that problem has been resolved. You introduce us to an interesting personality, Emily. We can all relate to her conflict over resolution-making.
It is a bit hard to believe that this one girl could be instrumental in overcoming a long-standing feud, but that's your story, so we accept it.
Thank you for sharing this with us, @timix648.
Thanks😁
Yeah I most admit, I got a little bit carried away there lol.
Thank you very much for your comment too,and a happy new year to the inkwell staffs...do uave a great day!!