This is so well told. You create characters that are interesting. You build the drama slowly, so in the end when Sydney is given a truly scary dare, we are ready to see her reap her just rewards. "Boo!" is perfect.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. You meet the prompt and skill challenge well. We appreciate that you engage with other authors in the community.
Thank you so much, I'm honoured. I wish to write more on this amazing platform @theinkwell