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RE: MONEY CHANGES LIFE (INKWELL NON-FICTION PROMPT)

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Hello @treasuree, You explain your approach to winning the lottery well. Not only do you explain what you would do if you had a lot of money, but you describe an incident in which your spouse actually did win money. This is an interesting twist on a hypothetical prompt.

You sound like a practical person who would take care of herself, and her family. You certainly have an eye for business. There is an editing issue with your piece, though. If you read the pasted section below you will note many phrase repetitions. Careful proofing in the future would eliminate this problem:

Now we have cause to believe holders of Satoshi Core could become millionaires, Since I didn't take the mining seriously, i only had mined one core, which is really saddening because there are people who have gotten up to 200 or more to Since I didn't take the mining seriously, I only mined 1 core, which is incredibly saddening because there are people who have earned up to 200 plus tokens; we now have reason to believe Satoshi core holders might become billionaires. I have actually missed out on being a millionaire, but thank God my spouse has some, so I have been thinking, "Let's assume it's true that the core would be enormous,", Lets say its true that core would be big, i have actaully misssed out becoming a millionaire,

Thank you for sharing this piece with us, @treasuree

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Thanks, yea I am a practical person .😁 I love my family and also I care for others too. That's why I like having people me around me

My bad, I think I missed that bit thanks so much for the correction. Making a correction on it now.