It was sweet to read about the timeline surrounding your wedding, and how the two of you overcame your challenges. However, this story reads as pure non-fiction. We recommend reading our article on creative non-fiction, which is full of tips on how to include the creative elements of fiction in your real-life stories. For example, describing the sounds, smells, and feelings of your wedding would make this into a lovely creative non-fiction story!
Regardless, it makes us happy to hear that everything worked out, congratulations! Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
Oh ok, I appreciate you point out this areas to me, I will get better in my writing with time, I will also try to follow the guide lines.
Thanks for sharing the topic