Hi @unyime1,
Thank you for posting in The Ink Well. This is an interesting and engaging story. However, there are a few parts that are hard to follow because they have not been translated. For example, this excerpt includes words that are not in English, and don't seem to be Igbo or Pidgen English, so Google Translate does not provide their meaning.
the big catfish he had finally caught after ages of shakara way fit tire pesin.
Can you tell us what that means? There are a few other non-English expressions as well, but they mostly make sense, in the context.
Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. Please be sure to read our community rules, which are posted at the top of The Ink Well community. We ask every writer posting in the community to read and comment on at least two other stories, for each one published in The Ink Well. Also, we do not accept chapter stories, or multi-part stories. Just wanted to call your attention that rule too, as this statement seems to indicate you will be continuing this story:
What follows suit is the rest of the part which this mighty PEN cannot leave to history.
Thank you!