We admire your courage in depicting a character that gives in to temptation. Most people reading this story are likely screaming, "Don't do it." And yet, she does. Although we may be disappointed in her, we realize this is a choice many people make. Writers should not shrink from the truth, no matter how unpalatable.
Your character portrayal is strong, as is your representation of conflict.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. We see that you engaged with writers last week. We hope that you engage once again with writers this week. Thank you!