generalistic in nature, rather than more specific and detailed, is more likely to flag as AI. The words and flow may feel nice but they don't add the necessary depth to the story. They tend to summarise a feeling or experience, rather than show it. We understand in your story that he spent time working in a place for a while that he realised did not fulfill him, but it would be more impactful if you wrote a scene showing him working and his interactions with customers that reflect his feelings and actions while serving them; that show an interaction that resulted in him bearing the brunt of someone's rudeness and his reflections on this, perhaps juxtaposed against an experience he remembers from home where the outcome of similar interactions is met with more peace and love. Perhaps a scene where someone shares a wonderful life experience that makes him feel bitter sweet as he mourns his own stagnation and unfulfilled dreams. I would recommend you take a look at our resources on fiction writing. There are links withing this article to other articles. Look more specifically at the articles on Show don't Tell and Developing Memorable Characters. I hope that makes sense to you. You have a lot to offer with your writing. Please keep honing your craft and sharing in The Ink Well. You have a skill there that would be great to develop!hello @wlin thank you for your replies. There were several areas of your story that flagged. We cannot share them all but the last two paragraphs in particular were flagged, if that helps at all. Your story didn't flag as one that had been generated by AI, simply one that may have had AI input in terms of AI being used to enhance it or make corrections. Nothing is infallible although our software is pretty good on the whole and opens up good conversations with authors. I have found that narrative within stories that seeks to be lightly descriptive and
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Thank you @TheInKWell, for the information and links shared. I will gladly review and read the posts on them. I am here to learn, and every input and recommendation in that regard will be greatly appreciated by me.
Also, I understand about developing the scenes more and not making them so general, that makes a lot of sense.
"Less generalist and more specific and detailed" is the key.
Thank you.
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