You certainly know how to write, and you handle the prompt/challenge well. Happiness is the goal that eludes each member of this family. And, the voice of the narrator is basically resignation. This is a practical person who views life's events through a 'realistic' lens. The one thing this story lacks is a true arc. You describe a circumstance and characters, but the story does not really go anywhere. It's a good story, an interesting story, but this is something a writer of your skill might think about.Hello @young-boss-karin,
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