Thank you for supplying the original content, @zain-ab001. That is helpful, as the original version does not appear to be AI generated. Please be sure not to use AI tools for revision. It will cause your story to be detected as AI generated.
Also we would like to request that you write an introduction post. This is a standard thing to do upon joining Hive so Hive members and community managers can get to know new members.
If you visit the @heyhaveyamet account, you can see many excellent examples in their posts.
I have made an introduction post before
https://ecency.com/hive-174578/@zain-ab001/my-introduction-post