This was a lovely read. The right person is out there for everyone. This was structured a little like a play in the way in which you presented your dialogue and narrative. Here is a link to an Ink Well article on how to write dialogue in fiction. Please also note that there is no need to couch your narrative in commas; it is more of a distraction than anything.
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We accept two kinds of short stories in The Ink Well: fictional stories and creative nonfiction stories. We are all about quality, and we expect writers to carefully review their work before posting. Not doing so will result in low curation rewards or posts being ignored. You can see our article on checking your posts for grammar here.
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Thank you so much @theinkwell for finding my story lovely.
This is my first nonfiction story in the community and I can assure my readers to improve my writing skills and write more impressive stories 😌🤗 thank you everyone.