Interesting story. Kazeem certainly needed to learn a lesson by getting a taste of his own medicine. One important tip for you: The author's voice really does not belong in a story. It should be told through the actions and dialogue of the characters. Be sure to read our article on author intrusion in our [catalog of fiction writing tips](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/catalog-of-fiction-writing-tips-from-the-ink-well.
Also, we expect everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on the work of at least two other community members for each story posted. Thank you.
Well noted ,thank you