This is a lively and interesting story, @zino01. We would have loved the story to be a bit longer. What about dialogue between the narrator and the bearded guy? How are they going to escape the ogre the second time around? Why doesn't he just take the ring off and see if that gets him back home? In other words you created a great setup! But it just drops off and feels unresolved in the end. Readers are typically looking for the end of the story to tell them "how it all turned out."
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